mirror+writing

MIRROR WIITING.

The young girl looking back at me seems familiar. Her sea blue eyes have a dark blue outline, a golden fleck that makes her face sparkle in the sun light. When she comes to school it always looks like she has straightened her hair. She has light blonde at the bottom and dark blonde hair at the top. Her hair is like the sun getting cover by rain cloud. Her diamond earrings bring out her freckles.

She was born in the year 1998 at Southern Cross hospital in Hamilton, which is a lot better now. She had a moment when it is her mum’s birthday. Her nana baked hot pink yummy chocolate cake for her mum; when nobody was looking she went into the kitchen and climbed on to the bench. Her mum turned around and saw her eating the cake, she said, "What are you doing? Come here now!". She went to her mum, her mum said "Have you been eating my cake?". She said "No", then her mum said "Why do you have chocolate all over our face? " She just ran to her room crying and her mum gave her some more cake anyway.

When she gets older she would like to be to the Airforce. She would like to be a singer and a hairdresser like her mum when she gets older. Her goals in life are to have a happy family and to have a house, a job and last of all to get in to the Airforce, like her dad.

__**Miss Crawford - A great piece of writing, Tayla. You have used some strong describing words in paragrpah 1. In paragraph two, could you describe some more things? What did the cake look like?**__